Test screening feedback ...


After looking over the comments i think what went well was :


- Costume : there was a few comments on the fact that the costume looked realistic to the age of the character etc.
- Q&A : follows typical conventions of a documentary
- Sound and shot clear


Some of the comments on what needs to be improved were a bit silly (many thanks Kalbir) however we needed to improve on :
The mise en scene : the placement of objects , what was in the background etc such as the fence , too much window and phone randomly placed .
-The lighting : Instead of facing the camera towards the window should of been the opposite - face looked to dark etc

Grades averaged -


Media language : B/C
Conventions : B/C
Creativity : C
Attention to detail : C
Technical proficiency : C